Revising

When I first started to revise my paper I of course did not know what all needed to be fixed. I then turned to others around me to look at my paper, and not everyone knew or had any ideas on what needed to be changed. I did get some help from a few others and some from myself. It was a little challenging for me to do, and I still think I have a few problems; I’m just not exactly sure. I like posting my paper for everyone else to look at and give me some ideas, it helps me a lot. I do not take all feedback negatively. I try to look at like people are trying to help by giving me some ideas on what needs to be changed or taken out. I especially like feedback from the professors that is what is important. If a professor tells me that something is wrong, needs to be added or taken out, or even changed, it helps me to think harder at what I could do to make this a better paper. Getting feedback from anyone is important to me. I hope you all got some great feedback for ideas on your paper as well. Good luck to you all on writing a great paper!